Strength and Weakness

Sample Paper 1
Strengths:
- The structure of the paper is very clear and concise
-The writer of the paper understood the APA format and very minimum to no mistakes
-The writer uses his sources effectively to back up his thesis
Weaknesses:
-His paragraphs tend to run on
-His paragraphs could have more impactful information instead of rambling
- In class we talked about tone and genre etc. The author could elaborate on that to make the paper more effective

Paper 2
Strengths:
-The writer uses pretty effective sources
-The writer interviewed valid people to help him with paper
-The sources were cited correctly
Weakness
-Missing title page and header and footer
-The quotes are cited incorrectly
-The text is not correct looks very unprofessional

Paper 3
Strengths:
-Writer clearly understands the APA format
-The paragraphs are clear and to the point
-The sources are very effective to the thesis
Weakness
-Could elaborate more on the quotes
-Could talk more about tone or genre
-The beginning was amazing but the paper seem to slowly decrease in effectiveness

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