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Major writing #2

My topic I want to write about is about Cyberbullying and does Age and Gender effect it. It is important to me because we are in a world where everyone has technology and it gets more and more advanced. Since the world keeps advancing does cyberbullying get worse? And at what age does cyberbullying stop or does it ever stop? Does Gender have an effect? https://static.lgfl.net/LgflNet/downloads/online-safety/LGfL-OS-Research-Archive-2006-Goldsmiths-Cyberbullying.pdf http://www.abs-center.si/gbccd/papers/p198.pdf https://onlinelibrary-wiley-com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/doi/pdfdirect/10.1002/ab.21555 https://link-springer-com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/content/pdf/10.1007/s12187-012-9177-z.pdf https://www-sciencedirect-com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/science/article/pii/S1041608015300248 https://pdf.sciencedirectassets.com/271802/1-s2.0-S0747563214X00075/1-s2.0-S0747563214002878/main.pdf?X-Amz-Security-Token=IQoJb3JpZ2luX2VjEBgaCXVzLWVhc3QtMSJHMEUCIQC8G%2BuhQQn5P3mk%2BrrC9%2FrxCCWRDz0gpxSKNv%2Bgp...
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outline for speech 1

Title  Show video Purpose of the Ad To inform the people of the Us about his campaign Hook ( Question) Strategy Setting  His audience Citizens of the us  People who are voting Ethos (Don't say them)  Trump's credibility Says what he has accomplished so far  personality  Character of the individual. Can be good or bad.  His appearance Pathos (Don't say) He sounds very confident Says things to move the audience  He's trying to motivate them Logos (Don't say) Uses all these facts to make him more credible Do you find it logical? Organized? His evidence Effectiveness Make a claim Music  visuals  Responses Closing
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Speech 1

https://www.realclearpolitics.com/video/2020/01/21/trump_ad_the_best_is_yet_to_come.html This is a trump political commercial talking about his campaign in the upcoming election. he uses ethos to convince the people to vote for him and explaining his way as to way he should be president. he uses logos by directly saying what he is going to do to fix America and uses specific details. Pathos is the huge thing. He wants the audience to feel his message and he does that first with the title "The best is yet to come" and he starts the ad with saying women and men so he intrigues the majority of the crowd by including them. The author is trump himself portraying his message. The audience is citizens who are wanting to learn more about politics and wanting to vote.
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First Draft of First Paper

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Strength and Weakness

Sample Paper 1 Strengths: - The structure of the paper is very clear and concise -The writer of the paper understood the APA format and very minimum to no mistakes -The writer uses his sources effectively to back up his thesis Weaknesses: -His paragraphs tend to run on -His paragraphs could have more impactful information instead of rambling - In class we talked about tone and genre etc. The author could elaborate on that to make the paper more effective Paper 2 Strengths: -The writer uses pretty effective sources -The writer interviewed valid people to help him with paper -The sources were cited correctly Weakness -Missing title page and header and footer -The quotes are cited incorrectly -The text is not correct looks very unprofessional Paper 3 Strengths: -Writer clearly understands the APA format -The paragraphs are clear and to the point -The sources are very effective to the thesis Weakness -Could elaborate more on the quotes -Could talk more about tone...
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3 Sources

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/0022440585900081 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1877042810008013 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0742051X97800030 These sources are non fiction writing. These sources are very informative and can help you improve your paper tremendously. A good paper needs strong academic sources and these sources can definitely be it.
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MLA vs. APA

Similarities: 1) Both are giving the author credit of their work 2) Both use parenthetical citations 3) Both use hanging idents when you write a citation 4) Both use double spacing 5) Both use times new roman and same margins and size 12 font Differences: 1) APA uses a title page 2) Top of the page headers are different 3) Different types of reference page 4) In text citations are different 5) APA has different ways to phrase short and long citations
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